My Lonely City



A lonely city this is. I watch the sun go down with my deep brown eyes. It gives off shadows that spread like dark winged angels on my city that shines as a diamond by the radiant sun. I watch. The tall buildings. I think of the people living in each of them. People with budding hearts, hearts the beat, hearts that resonate with love. One of those hearts belong to me, that darling, silent, unknown heart that I have known for all time. 

A lonely city this is. I watch scores and scores of people, and yet, sometimes it seems like a barren, deserted place. A lonely car I see far off, headed towards an unknown destination. An unknown journey. Take me with you, silent rider, and may be in the midst of not knowing, I'll strip off the last layer of camouflage that suffocates my skin, bare myself to you, in the hopes that you will know me for all my ugliness, for all my weaknesses, for all my sorrow.

A lonely city this is. Let's leave its quiet loneliness behind and drive away to our new mysterious stopping point. I want to lose my silence in yours. Tell me all your sorrows and may be, just may be, you can be convinced that I am what your dying heart needs. Your faint heart beat needs two warm hands to hold it and keep it from fading. Let those hands be mine. Then may be, you won't have to leave my lonely city by nightfall like this. May be , the loneliness won't intimidate you any longer, and may be you'll stay. For me. 


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a city is lonely when you're lonely from inside

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The lonely city will soon blossom and that is what I am sure of :) xxx
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Mehreen,

Loneliness felt at such times expressed so well. It is true that even in huge crowd one will feel lonely.

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Loneliness is what many people have. but one of the reason loneliness have is the people who are scared enough to face the consequences.
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I'm new to your blog as of today and love it! I'm your new GFC follower! I'd love for you to link up at my "Life is About... blog hop" going on now!

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Sometimes these big cities can make one feel incredibly lonely, as weird as it may sound!
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Ah love that song by Bright Eyes (the one quoted in your drawing).
You expressed loneliness in such a beautiful way...
I pray that loneliness is no where near you soon :)
I have come to realize the reason why you have made your title My Lonely City. Thanks a lot for sharing to us this very nice and meaningful story of yours. This reminds me of something that had happened to me in the past. Thanks once again for this very nice post of yours.
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You have such a lovely site, love the layout, I need to figure out how to create a nice banner like the one you have!! By the way I found your blog on Monday’s Beauties Blog Hop, and I am now a new follower!
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Hey! Just found your blog through the Follow Me Wednesday! Hope you have a happy holidays and drop on over to my blog and follow back :) Thanks!

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This is such a sad post but so beautifully written, pure great writing skills. The writer must have been in a very pensive mood. I wonder about which lonely city the writer is talking about.

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